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That's crazy! You managed to make this in 2 hours, how did you come up with the concept?

I feel the execution is very well done.

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EDIT. Thank you @ICantSeeHelp Pikmin is a nice series.

ICantSeeHelp responds:

dude I was just bored and I was drawing Stan and Pikmin was playing in a another tab and then I was like eh sure

Thank you, I appreciate the control you exhibit in your line work to define the character; it is excellently done. The result forms appealing shapes and is not a mess of lines, making it engaging to read the action.

Your movement is fluid, and what is especially impressive is your ability to control the perspective of your scene.

If he is shooting a laser blast in front of him, how is he moving upwards? Shouldn't it project him backward? Additionally, the character pulling the beam Kamehameha upwards, wouldn't that propel him downwards? I understand that this functions because the character can fly; however, I had issues with that being visually explained to me during the scene.

Would it make more sense if he was shooting the kamehameha downwards so he is moving up?

You incorporating sound design into your movie is an excellent choice I felt very immersed.

00:20 - I feel it should be "Fade to Black" instead of "Cut to Black" because it disrupts the impact of the scene. The character is tired and winding down; having it be a cut disrupts the energy that the scene is, I feel, trying to communicate. It's like the character is falling asleep, that's how I see it.

And please, feel free to easily dismiss my review; you probably should. I don't know much about animation. I'm a severely autistic man who went to a special school for most of his life. I may not be knowledgeable, but that doesn't change the fact that this was my experience with your movie, and I found it amazing. I would just like to be more honest, I would just like to be helpful.

Yipcks responds:

Thank you for the feedback!!

I'm glad you liked the line work, I try to put as much detail as long as it doesnt prevent me from keeping a nice flow in the animation.

I didn't even think about the kamehameha propelling him in the opposite direction, but it's definetly something I'll have in mind next time I do something like this.

I'm always thinking about these little things, like which way the hair will move or how to mantain momentum, so it's refreshing to see it's not just me who enjoys that kinda of stuff :3

Oh yeah, fade to black would make a lot more sense, I always get lazy in the ending while editing, sometimes I forget stuff like that.

Overall, great review sir! Gave me some stuff to think about in my next one.

Cheers!

Welcome to Newgrounds, Georgia!

Your test is interesting, it would be pretty nice to know how you did the "After"
The song is glitching and it's creating crackles that are unpleasant to listen to.

It would be super cool to see your style animated! Please always keep experimenting and try out new things!

GeorgiaC-1811 responds:

I'm glad you like my animation test. i hope to upload more animations here in the future so be on the lookout for those

as for the audio. i am sorry about it. it was fine when I uploaded it. maybe something happened when it was uploading

Knuckles deflecting the projectiles is cool -- 00:38
I enjoy seeing unique combat scenarios.

I would press yes to continue!

NanoSoft responds:

Much thanks! :D ngl that really motivates me to return to this project sometime in the future :]

Merry Fucking Christmas! You are right Frank over-eating is a serious problem at Christmas.

Super wholesome! Mary Tankmas!

Epic fight! I love the variation in the framing.

BarFlyShorts responds:

Thank you! 😁

Milhouse as Zack is genius.

LESS EET! The narrative is CERTIFIED PLATINUM-GRADE.
01:08 -- This is iconic. I really like this original character you've made.

The FNAF PENIS franchise saved my life. Scot Cawthon is the SEX GOD. When Freddy Fazbear raised his eyebrow, I knew he was an essential worker. RIP.

ICantSeeHelp responds:

we truly lost not only lost an essential worker today but an essential sex icon
rip fredbear

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