He pull up, he smash up, he crazy.
He pull up, he smash up, he crazy.
It's at this moment I am proud of having autism.
Joshi has awoken a more sigma side of me.
Excellent work. The plot is well communicated with good pacing on the comedy. The performance is great as well. Strong character designs!
Great attention to fluidity and strong shapes. The silhouettes are on point. Iconic sound effects are appreciated! Excellent focus on comedy and action! With great execution, the rhythm was fast and the plot was communicated well using visuals, which I would say is very creative and engaging.
It's amazing to see your animation has come out! And the voice acting is excellent as well. I'm happy to see you found the right voice actor for your animation - you made the right decision.
The way the background moves in the opening sequence, from 00:00 to 00:01, feels a bit uncomfortable for me to experience. However, the second scene does not have the same jarring movement, and feels a lot more natural, as the mountains do not feel as juxtaposed to the faster pace of the buildings' movement.
Perhaps I am simply not as familiar with seeing that type of rapid, layered background movement, and it sticks out as a bit strange to me. I apologize if this feedback seems odd, but I wanted to be honest about my experience with your animation.
Your use of colors and shapes is very awesome! And the punchline is good!
You are very welcome to call me stupid, because I am. Please, I hope my feedback can be of use to you. This is just my experience.
Thank you for creating your animation, you are extremely skilled.
Thanks for your feedback! Yeah I tried to get this out like right away so I kind of didn’t know what to do for the background moving in the first scene. I’ll try to think of a better way to do it tho. Glad you liked it tho! :)
As a new viewer! I can absolutely appreciate the high-quality animation, the well-thought-out plot structure, and the strong characterization. The dynamic intro featuring nice music is very well done.
Good use of music and sound effects, as well as the way the expressions emphasize the mood of the characters, is well-thought-out and gives the work a dynamic and engaging quality. There is also great variation in the scenery.
Your modeling skills are extremely impressive. The presentation is of immense quality, with a very high level of professionalism. Utilizing strong lighting to showcase the colors - all serve to present the full body of Gwimbly effectively.
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The Internet is evil. It corrupted me.”
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