Aalasteir's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Homestar runner twins]

very good, very nice, what do you like Homestar?

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@Manuelfm, yes it's very good

Manuelfm responds:

Yes what about you?

[Wake up]

There’s a clear and strongly communicated story. What I think would help is at 0:20, where there’s a frame that goes too quickly—I find that one distracting. Overall, the story is good, and its structure is well done. The expressions are funny and add effectively to the humor.

Fantastic work! There’s great variation in the facial expressions and camera movements.

How did you get interested in Newgrounds?

What is your process for creating animation?

GnarpzART responds:

Thank you for the detailed critique, I really appreciate it.

I got interested in newgrounds from my interest in art/animation, a lot of really good stuff on here.

Now my process is nothing special, I write a script, starting from some small idea that i just build on, until I have a story. Honestly most of the scripts i write are very improvisational, the process is just whats most natural for me. I then record audio, and lastly just animate whatever I feel like fits the audio. (This process also leads to a lot of scripts that I don’t animate).

[Electrode]

Great design! I think it would be cool if the Electrode shot out electricity. Great job!

[Cain finds a gun!]

Great animation! Good style, the timing is good, keep making more! Awesome work!

[There's an alien in the ghetto]

I like the character designs, and the lip sync is well done, as is the movement of the characters. And sound design.

How did you get interested in creating animations?

[how'd that get there]

That's a very good friend, always pulling funny pranks.

klydewitakay responds:

Such a goofball he is

[Mars Stars - VENUS ATTACKS]

Fantastic work! You have great story structure. And the pacing is good, I also like to compensation of the scenes. And great sound design!

["Lemonade Stand" (The Champa Show)]

Lemon!

[The non-sense show 2]

Great skits, very funny! They have good timing.

[Tony Sopranos in Toronto]

You can only push a man so far!